One of my best friends, Eloise from Highly Improbable, and I are (unofficially) writing songs for FAWM (February Album Writing Month). I don’t know enough about music to write melodies, however, so I just write the lyrics and pretend that I’m actually writing songs. 😅 Here is one of the “songs” I wrote, which was heavily inspired by a book I read this year called The Lost Art Of True Beauty.
My Temporary Home
Always been told to draw strength from within
But what if I don’t feel comfortable in my own skin?
Look in the mirror and see only the flaws
But what if I take a moment and pause
It’s the lost art of true beauty
Viewing the outside is not the goal
Because the outside is easy to perceive
But it shouldn’t matter so much to me
The eyes are the windows to the soul
Look inside, tell me, what do you see?
All this time I’ve had it wrong – trying and failing
To fix myself, and in the waters of doubt, flailing
Look in the mirror and see only the flaws
But what if I take a moment and pause
It’s the lost art of true beauty
Viewing the outside is not the goal
Because the outside is easy to perceive
But it shouldn’t matter so much to me
The eyes are the windows to the soul
Look inside, tell me, what do you see?
God made me who I am and He doesn’t make mistakes
I try to tell my heartache
I trust in His reasoning and try to let my insecurities go
It isn’t easy, the going will be slow
It’s the lost art of true beauty
He pays attention to the heart for sure
He looks inside and tells me what He sees
He sees every little piece of me
A child of God that He created for His pleasure
Of all my insecurities, I am finally free
This is His temple, this is my temporary
Home
But the LORD said to Samuel, “Do not look at his appearance or at his physical stature, because I have refused him. For the LORD does not see as man sees; for man looks at the outward appearance, but the LORD looks at the heart.” (First Samuel 16:7 NKJV)
This “song” you wrote is as good, if not better than lots of the songs I’ve heard. So beautiful, comforting, and a wonderful example of the love for God, and His love for us. God bless you :):)
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I agree with you, Margaret. I used to write songs and this one is well written and refreshing. I love how Grace incorporated our Father’s love for us. 💙
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I didn’t know you wrote songs 🙂 I am so blessed to have met such talented children of God.
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Yes, and they were some of the best memories! 😃
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You wrote songs?! 😀 Have you ever shared any of them?
Aww, thanks! 🙂 His love is amazing! ❤
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Yes, I used to, but not anymore. I shared them with my friends and family then.
You’re most welcome and of course, His love is amazing. 💙
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Oh, I see. 🙂
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Aww, thank you, Margaret! ❤ His love is incredible!
God bless you too! 🙂
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❤ It was my pleasure❤
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This is absolutely beautiful… filled with feeling, meaning and, especially, truth! Love it! Blessings to you!! 💕💕💕
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Thank you! ❤
Blessings to you as well! 🙂
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It’s wonderful! I hope you find someone to put it to music. I can already “hear” it as an anthem on the radio. Love this! ❤
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Thank you! 🙂 Aww, haha. 😀 That would be amazing. ❤
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Wonderful song! I’m so glad you are listening to the Lord, and writing His words. May you be blessed!
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Thank you! 🙂 He is so good to give me the words – I enjoy writing them! ❤ May you be blessed as well!
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I’m convinced if we would see ourselves as God sees us in Christ, we would know true joy and peace no matter what others say. I enjoyed your lyrics.
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I agree wholeheartedly! ❤
Thank you, I'm so glad! 🙂
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Excellent lyrics. It would be wonderful to put the melody to the words. I’ve written a melody to a blogger’s poem. I played my keyboard and sang and recorded it. I emailed it to him. He played it to his family. Shortly after that, he was very ill and I don’t hear from him anymore. He is a godly person. I hope he is still around.
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Thank you! ❤ It would!
Wow, that is amazing! I bet he really enjoyed that. 🙂
Aww, I'm sorry to hear he became ill; I hope he is still around too.
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He last poem sounded like plea for life. He didn’t want to go to hospital, but pray instead. I said he could do both. He said he would listen to me and go to hospital. I didn’t hear from him anymore. His blog is still there but has no new post.
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Oh no, that’s sad. ❤ You're right, and I'm glad that he listened to you.
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Probably his son and siblings were with him!
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Yeah. ❤
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Maybe I’ll pop into his site and see if anything happens!
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🙂 I hope that he responds!
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Yes, I hope so! 🙂
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These are beautiful lyrics!! ❤ I love the Bible verse you shared with it, as well. 🙂
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Thank you! ❤
😀 It's one of my favorite verses!
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Amen! This world is NOT our home! We’re just passing through! What a lovely poem! God bless! Xx ☺💖💖😊
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😀 Yes, exactly, just passing through! 🙂
Thank you! ❤ God bless you too and I hope you are feeling better! 🙂
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Indeed!!🙏
You’re welcome much and thank you my dear! Yessssss!!! Much more better lol just still have the coughing lol 😩😂 thanks for asking💛
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I'm glad that you're better! I hope that the coughing goes away soon. 🙂 💖
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Ah, thanks much hun! Yes it will in Jesus Name!! 😇💞
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Amen! 🙏 😇 ❤
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❤ this is so beautiful and touching!!!
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Thank you! ❤ 🙂
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