In Him

I suppose that this is kind of an experimental pattern. I’m not quite sure why I have little interludes between the rhyming sections, but it seems like they are supposed to be there; parts of it doesn’t make as much sense without them there as context. X) I call this one, “In Him.” ๐Ÿ™‚

In Him


I felt like Snow White in a deep slumber
Dead to the world; sawing away lumber
No true loveโ€™s kiss can fix the blunder
I could not have felt any number



I am animate, not really asleep
I am not snoring, not making a peep
Sometimes I think I am in too deep
Maybe I should take a flying leap

of faithโ€ฆ


Overcoming sin, on my own, I tried
Iโ€™m incapable โ€“ at this realization, I cried
I see that for all, including me, He has died
He is ready, He is able; I let Him inside

my soulโ€ฆ

He cares.

My Savior rebuilds me when I tumble
His loving arms catch me when I stumble
His hands put me together whenever I crumble
And He forgives me when I fumble

He is there…

I wonder.

Why did I not accept Him before?
He created me, down to my core
He wants me to be free, to soar
To chase after Him, more and more

each dayโ€ฆ

I believe.

He has the power to forgive
His love for us flows like a sieve
Thus, for Him, my Father, I live
My life to My Redeemer, I give

Iโ€™m Yoursโ€ฆ

I live for You.

My faith is not based on a whim
With The Light, lifeโ€™s not so dim
The future no longer looks grim
Iโ€™m no longer lifeless, but living in Him!


10 thoughts on “In Him

    • Yes, you may! It would make me so happy if you do that! ๐Ÿ˜€ Thanks so much for asking, this made my day! ๐Ÿ™‚ (“In Him” was actually originally intended to be a song, but I can’t read music very well and I have no idea how to create a melody. XD) Have fun, and if you think about it, I’d love to know how it goes! ๐Ÿ™‚

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